Good research gathered. Here's my review of the old remarks first, then the rewrite:What's Wrong With the Old RemarksToo long - almost certainly over 2,000 characters as written.Specific issues:Repeats the same idea multiple times ("thriving commercial corridor" ... "proven high-traffic location" ... "strong fundamentals")Use-case list is too long - dine-in, takeout, catering, delivery, tiffin, cloud kitchen all in one breath dilutes focus"Subject to landlord approval" weakens the pitch mid-sentence"Rare chance" and "significant upside" are filler - every listing says thisMissing: square footage and Tim Hortons as a named anchor neighbour (strong credibility signal)No seat count, no lease term specificsRewritten RemarksTurnkey Restaurant Space For Sale - 285 Rexdale Blvd, EtobicokeFully built-out and fully equipped Middle Eastern/Shawarma restaurant space in a high-demand North Etobicoke commercial corridor. Strategically positioned just off Hwy 27 with quick access to Hwys 401, 409 &
TypeSale Of Business
Property useWithout Property
ZoningCommercial
Size1,775 sqft
UtilitiesAvailable
Water / SewerMunicipal · Sanitary+Storm
Randy MillerBroker of RecordUrban Avenue Realty Ltd.647-492-9229 · randy@urbanavenue.ca
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MLS® W13211302
· Listing courtesy of EXP REALTY · October 9, 2026
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